Monday, November 9, 2015

Short Story I Wrote....Title Is 'Innocence'

NERVOUS AND SO INNOCENT, the young man walked into the tiny music cafe with plenty of moronic inabilities cascading inside of him.  He did not realize the fine attributes he had like his patrician good looks. He was submerged in all the blatant rejection crap that had been foisted on to him for a long time.  He had been rejected so many times.  His social skills had been crushed horribly.  He read books because the damn reading was all he had.  There in the cafe over on the far left there was an odd, melancholy looking girl...He stared like the absurd idiot he felt he was.  He got up guts and walked toward her.  The brittle female saw the mark that was him coming.  She readied her scam routine.  Gonna get him, good.  In moments he was done for again.  After three months it was over and the curse of heinous rejection had smashed him again. He felt like Barnes in 'Sun Also Rises.'

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Nice Writing

THE GOOD terse writing of Ernest Hemingway is a real joy.  He does not use too many adjectives.  His 'Torrents' is a fine tome.